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Birthday Surprise – (Chapter: Part 1 of 2: A Private Show)
“Shot! Shot! Shot! Shot!” my friends shouted as I tossed back my fourth and hopefully final tequila shot.
“How the hell did you guys even get this?! “ I slurred as the poison burned my throat.
Aiden pointed at the stripper on the stage farthest from us “she bought them for you. She told me to wish the birthday girl a happy birthday!”
My face felt hot I couldn’t tell if I was blushing or if it was the shot hitting me. It was only 9 o’clock and I was already buzzing hard at a strip club. It was Aiden’s idea, go figure. The whole day flew by so fast and the only thing I could think about was Ashley. First cheerleading practice, then a JV game, then dinner with my family, now a strip club with the group. I haven’t talked to my best friend since lunch, since she gave me this. I absentmindedly grazed my fingers over the metal laying against my chest. I wasn’t worried, I know she had to work and she kept texting me saying we’ll talk later but I couldn’t get her out of my head. Why did she give this to me? Why did it make me feel more special and more loved than anything else I’ve ever received? The tequila was doing a mediocre job at best of pushing her out of my mind.
Kyla turned to me worried, “Are you ok Spencer? I know a strip club isn’t really your thing, we can leave if you want?”
I shook the image of the shy bumbling Ashley from lunch from my brain and forced a laugh “No no I’m having a great time; I just wish Ash was here ya know?”
Kyla laughed heartily “Yeah she’s the gayest one she would probably love this place more than anyone! Well, you know, besides Aid over there, oh LORD.”
She looks over to the stage closer to where we are sitting and Aiden is holding a $1 bill in his mouth waving it around for the dancer. We laugh and watch his lame attempt at seduction.
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it was kinda weird cuz today this girl i know turned 18, but she’s only buying a lotto ticket. maybe. but, oh wow that was good. i can’t wait for pt. 2 to see what spencer does. oh, and btw, dont be absurd! this was really good, of course we wanna see a part 2! haha.
Very, very good. Can’t wait to see how it all works out….hope the second part will be up real soon!
Um..yeah, babe, part two now. very very hot, part two right the fuck now
yeah. what stix said.
AGREED! Post part two!
you should definitly continue that sucks that neither got off but than again ashley just realized who she was ‘dancing’ for and spencer now knows it was ashley, wonder how the next part will go
oh my my maya :) god yes! post more SOON! this story ROCKS! awesome description/details of the whole lap dance scene- i could so see it! i just HAVE to know what happens next! :)
Holy dear lord…. Please I am begging u. Post REALLY soon please!!!
oh emm gee loved it! u have to keep going i wanna kno hat spencer does. it was a great ending of the chapter PMS hurry hurry hurry lol
holy hell if that didn’t remind me of my first lap dance! and it was on my birthday too! awesome job, I’m gonna read part 2 in a bit, but I loved this! fucking hot hot hot!
Damn! I should have gone to a strip club for my 18th birthday. Haha. Just kidding. Anyway. That was amazing and I can’t wait for part II.
continue continue continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you cant stop there!!!!!
Oh my god more!!!more!!!
excuse me while i pick my jaw up off the floor..you know how you watch movies and you yell at the people on screen cause they’re oblivious to whats going on??..throughout the whole strip club scene i’m reading and shouting (in my head) the whole time “ASHLEY IS A STRIPPER! OMG ASHLEY IS THERE! SPENCER IT’S ASHLEY!”..hahahaha..and i just about flipped at the ending and then remembered it’s only part 1…sooo with that said..the 2nd part needs to go up now..that was totally hot..LOVE it..
I’m going to second stix’s comment. And really… part two right now. Really.
that was really good! So hot! I was hoping the stripper was Ashley haha. Can’t wait for part 2 pms!!!
That’s great! Hurry up and write part 2! LOL!