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Ashley ran into the shower not because she couldn’t stand to be around Spencer but because she couldn’t let Spencer see the tears that were now streaming down her face. She turned on the water but never even got in. Instead she sat on the floor biting the towel so if Spencer was still there she wouldn’t hear her crying. Ashley couldn’t believe what she had done. She had tried so hard to not be the person that everyone thought she was and yet here she was full of remorse, hiding in her bathroom after showing someone the door. Ashley thought again, not just someone, but Spencer. This couldn’t be happening, not again. Waiting until she was sure that Spencer was gone Ashley shut off the water and hurried back into her room. She slammed her terrace doors closed and grabbed her phone.
Ashley: I need to see you.
Aiden: Ash, what’s the matter?
Ashley: I fucked up.
Aiden paused only for a moment.
Aiden: Meet me at Lucky’s in 15 minutes.
Ashley closed the phone and ran to her closest. She grabbed her most comfortable pair of sweat pants and threw on a hooded sweatshirt before jetting down the steps and into her car. As she turned the key she made the mistake of looking up and seeing Spencer’s light on. Throwing the car into reverse she slammed on the gas and peeled out of her own driveway. The tires squealed and smoked but she didn’t care. All she wanted was to get as far away from Spencer Carlin as quickly as she could.
Only moments later she was pulling into a spot right next to Aiden’s.
He was leaning against his SUV with his arms outstretched, ready for Ashley to curl into them. She ran to him and buried her head in his chest.
Pushing her away for a better view his eyes grew wide.
Aiden: I’m sorry. I was waiting for Ashley Davies.
Ashley looked up at him, obviously confused.
Ashley: Huh?
Aiden: Well, you couldn’t possibly be her. My friend Ashley would never be caught out in public in a hoodie and sweatpants.
Ashley smiled.
Ashley: Exactly! That is how serious this is.
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im addicted… need more
good update. i wonder how that party is gonna go :/. haha. oh, thats cool that is based on one of your friends, i bet he is a blast..haha. yeah it is long, but i really do like it a lot.
thank you for your wonderful advice on my little situation. im going to kiss you now… thats hilarious. shed probably think im joking, because i always jokingly flirt with her and everything. i do it to see if she gets bothered. she doesnt though. she just blushes, and then she’ll get really close to me and “push” me away. i say “push because, she shoves me like an inch. what does this mean? by the way, if its not too, i dont know, stalker-ish, whats your first name? mines alexis, by the way. and actually i havent read your story yet, i just wanted to say thanks really quick. but i will read, then come back to comment. again.
You were wondering if I would comment? Did you miss me flair? How cute! Haven’t even been on our date yet and already you’re obsessing about where I am? My plan’s working perfectly! ;) I absolutely LOVE that it is written from Ashley’s point of view – I think you write Ashley, if it is possible, even better than you write Spencer because she’s such a smartass. And i mean that in the best way possible. Keep it up Flair, you officially have me begging for more ;)
okay i read it! i cant wait until lyla comes. she sounds like shes going to be awesome. i wonder how the party is going to be with ashley, lyla, and spencer. especially once lyla finds out about them. ohhh! its gonna be great!
“You know the cute little straight girl who lives next door… ” this was funny. lol but yea this is a really good stroy i started reading it last night and just got to this chapter today. but yea i like how it was in ashleys point of view and ur a rly good writer. lol i dont rly comment much on stories but ill make an exception for urs :) post more soon..byee
I like that. I really really like that. The fact that you only do NC-17 when it’s needed in the story. Not just to be like, Hey how about we have a sex sence just for the hell of it. Some stories have a ridiculus amount of NC-17. And the story lines are really good. I hate it. And thank you for your comment on my story. Is was really sweet and thoughtful. Oh, and if you like plot twist wait ’til you find out what I have planned. Mwahaha! Hey are you reading my other story. I don’t remember. Sorry. But just check it out, it’s surprising. To me atleast. If you have already read it and didn’t like it, no pressure. I don’t want you reading something your not into. I know I wouldn’t. Anyways not to you story…I think its funny how Spencer hardly has any privacy in the house. It gonna be interesting to see Lyla come into this story. Who knows if she has a little crush on Spencer? Oh, and Madison is such a tease. PMASAP
Ok first off, yeah I still live on Long Island–Valley Stream to be exact. Ok and now to the story, Fantastic job as always. Aiden giving advice to Ash? Hmm I was alittle bit shocked but suprisingly it was pretty good advice. The big question is can Ash and Spence both forgive eachother? I hope they do and then maybe Spence will have the guts to cut Danny out all together? I know I know wishful thinking but hey don’t shoot me =) Love love love your story!!! PMS!
well if you can do all those and keep writing as well as you are…then i can forgive you a little bit more with each update….;) i can be convinced….perhaps:)
So I’m sitting here in mcdonalds waiting for my bf to pick me up and its taking forever! Uhg! Boys theryre a drag thank god I’m bi hahaha! Anyways I agree I’m addicted to this story! Puts a smile on my face everytime I see an update. And lyla my mom is like my best friend as well as my mother but idk if she will be as cool as your lyla lol. Love this keep the updates comin! *MUAH! HUG!* in return for all the ones you give out lol. Pms =)
damn I am amazed by the amount of comments already lol.. I feel so insignificant *tear* haha jkjk dang that aiden always has to bring up that.. I knt wait til the party for lyla! hope ashley comes n they work it all out. it is strange with aiden being all insightful lol post asap! p.s. damn all these chicks hittin on u lol playa playa haha jkjk
this story is my coke for the day :) i like coke now. (not really…i ment as in your story) lol. anyway. i looooooove this!!!! gah its like you keep us at the edge of our seats the entire time!
WTH did Spencer put that ring back on? Yes, the ring bothers me a lot because she’s not in love with Danny boy. I’m not saying she’s in love with Ashley but if she was willing to dump old boy after knowing Ashley for less than a week…. that doesn’t scream out “I’m in love!” to me. She needs to end the engagement and take a moment to find out who Spencer is. Of course that’s the boring way but something has gotta give. Ashley must have respect for herself and not become intimate (again) with a woman who is engaged and sexually active with her fiancé. Being friends will be hard but the deal breaker on an intimate relationship has to be the ending of the Danny boy relationship. PMS!
This story is baller.
i had to create an account just so i could comment on your story, I am seriously addicted and I can’t wait to know what happens next! I loved Ashley’s point of view and seeing how conflicted she is. But I agree with 2bz2breading, this whole engagement thing has got to go! lol keep up the amazing writing! Can’t wait to read more!
Fav line “Can’t there be a “transition Ashley” first?” LMAO…I think she may need more than just one transition phase…she is so screwed up. We love the drama, so keep up the good work!! PMS
i love this story i like wait for more and more cant get enough pms super soon
ok so ashley has already fallen and hit the ground hard. I want them to at least talk to each other but will see. Aidens confession does not help at all. Update Soon! loved it