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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told
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LA 2029
“You know you will regret that don’t you” Al had returned to the join the others after spending 10 minutes in the dryer,
“You looked a little hot Al,” Tina laughed.
Bette, Shane and Alice looked a little puzzled.
“What’s going on” Bette asked the question they where all thinking.
“Your hilarious wife pushed me into the pool….fully dressed I might add”
The groups laughter was interrupted by the life size hologram of Dana that appeared in the middle of the room but then continued when Al dives behind the sofa “I’ve just left ok” she calls out mid dive.
“Hi Dana”
“Hey you guys” Dana waves at the little ones. “You having fun with Nana’s B&T”
Alice waves enthusiastically “Hey Great Dane…”
“Alice…..” Bette was ready to correct Alice until it clicked “Oh never mind Al told you to call Aunt Dana that didn’t she”
Alice nods.
“I assume she has left, she was supposed to meet me to visit my mother 20 minutes ago” Dana says.
“Oh no she’s still here….” Bette looks over the back of the sofa “Al your much better half would like to talk to you”
Al lifts herself up of the floor but not before giving Bette the finger.
“Hi ….I was ready to leave…” Al saw the disbelieving look on Dana’s face. “Really I was and then Tina pushed me in the pool fully clothed….tell her Tina” She nudges Tina’s shoulder.
“Sorry Dana I did….” Tina concedes.
“Deservedly no doubt….Al, I will go alone….again…but when you do get home your dinner will be in the cat”
“Speaking of dinner why don’t you come here….Bette’s cooking but don’t let that put you off” Tina adds.
“You sure…it looks like you already have your hands full and Al must be driving you crazy by now”
“That she is” Bette confirms, “but your the only one that keeps her in check, so come please”
“Ok…I’ll see you later….Oh and Al…..Mr Tiddles VI is having your side of the bed tonight” with that Dana was gone.
“Small price to pay I’d rather sleep on a bed of nails than visit Dana’s mother” Al shivers. “Looks like your stuck me, any chance of a coffee Porter”
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Hey great as usual, bt pls don’t keep them apart for long:)I understand u can’t re post everything bt may be just dis story PLEASE. PPVVVS
tina will do the right thing for bette, even if bette dsnt like it she will go. poor tina losing her family and bette now wow skimm drama drama. any way skimm love reading and talking see ya
Wow can you say Peggy leaving the crow speechless… even though we all know they end up together in the end…still hard knowing that they go through this temporary seperation.
Skimmy you do spin an excellent yarn sooooooo perfectly. Why couldn’t Bette finish her degree in California…Tina had just been through a tremendous trauma and I think that Bette was doing the right and unselfish thing staying with her. Why do other people always think they know best. Bette was smart and taking a year off to help Tina recover wouldn’t have been a huge hardship for her. Well there endeth my sermon…stand up Bette and just say NO! Ohhhh….really well written by the way!
Poor Tina but hope she will go with Bette!
wow…nice twist in the story. didnt expect that one. great writing! looking forward what happens next…and yah, what are bette’s suitcases doing on the bed???
Poor Tina… instead of Bette leaving, was actually going with Bette an option? Post soon, and thanks.
ROFLMAOOOOOO HEY!!!! I resemble part of that author note! LMAO! You are too funny. The chat was hysterical the other night, and girl you are VERY sharp. I hardly got through my popcorn before you “guessed” that other person’s alter ego. I’m going to send you an honorary police badge! Okay…once again you have me hanging on your every word. Because it’s you, the unpredictable author who will write from her creative side and not what may or may not be expected by the readers, I’m VERY worried about the suitcases……….MORE!!!!!! ABBA ABBA ABBA! Hee Hee
OM Tna hasn’t got any family left apart Bette. What will she do if Bette leaves? poor Tina and Poor Bette.
OM Tna hasn’t got any family left apart Bette. What will she do if Bette leaves? poor Tina and Poor Bette.
Skimmer. Wow. You’ve left me totally speechless and absolutely and totally thankful that you stuck to your guns on this writing thing. I didn’t know we had a chat thing here. You know you’ve just contributed to my not getting any work done ever. Especially if you’re going to be around. Ok, back to commenting on the story. Wow (I know, I know, how illiterate of me to have to repeat that). Fat legs, how could you do that? You’re killing me here. No, but seriously, I was on page 4 or 5 when I realized that even though the obvious person to feel bad for is Tina, Bette has also lost a big part of her life. The Kennards were basically her adoptive family when she was younger. This is a great twist. Though I would have liked to have seen more conversation between Peggy and Tina. They seem like great matches for one another. Love this. So MUCH. PPVVVVVVVVVVVVS (and that isn’t enough V’s but I figured my comment would get cut off eventually)
Peggy’s behaviour is outrageous! Argh! Poor Tina… I’m glad that you continue this story. :o)
Awww Tina, her love for Bette is stronger than her fear of losing a loved one again. Is there a possibility that Tina leaves with Bette and stays the entire time that Bette is in England?
Thank you Skimmer for updating this story. Excellent twist. Love it and can’t wait to see what happens! I hope Tina goes with Bette! Thank you again for this and I’m sorry I can’t answer your question – I don’t know who I’ll save and probably drown being so fickle :-)
Ah persistent pushy Peabody
Skimmer I love both or your stories. Thanks for this update. Tina is very brave…