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Masked Feelings CH 81 The Beauty of Communication
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Alice looked at her a bit mystified, wondering if this had to do with one of the women she had seen her with at the party. No matter what Dana had to say, she knew it wasn’t good. Even worse, she asked her to sit down. Maybe she wanted to talk about Roxy again. She really didn’t know what she wanted to say and it left her a little more than on edge.
Alice – I guess you better talk first.
Dana – First off, have you heard from Roxy since she came looking for you?
Alice – No…. what’s wrong, Dana?
Dana – Maybe you should tell me what the two of you talked about when she came to see you… if you don’t mind.
Alice – She didn’t know why I left, but she knew it was because of you. She overheard you and Shane talking at the Planet.
Dana – I should’ve figured….. that’s how she must’ve figured out you were gone.
Alice – She was the last person I expected to see.
Dana – I’m sure she used every resource available to find you. I really hate that about her. She uses her position of power to get what she wants.
Alice – Why didn’t you come looking for me?
Dana – Where was I supposed to look, Alice? It’s not like you gave me any clue to where you might be. I couldn’t call you, because your cell phone was here. I went as far as filing a missing person’s report… wasn’t that enough? Considering the fact that you walked out on me, I wasn’t so sure you wanted to be found. What good would it be to find you when you weren’t ready to talk?
Alice sighs.
Alice – Yes… you’re right. But a part of me wishes that you would’ve came after me.
Dana – Somehow I don’t see you as the woman that needs to be rescued…. or needing looked after.
Alice – You used to think so… not that long ago. Did something change, Dana? I miss how close we used to be. I miss how much we used to be there for each other. I wish you needed me as much as I need you.
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wow I left like this longest comment ever…. but I guess it’s not on here. I just LOVE your story! brteyes!! I bet Alice was DELEISHOUS!! and poor Roxy-I am Danish fan myself, but I find Roxy extremely attractive. yeah- I kindov wish one more time of Alice and Roxy rockin’ haha… call me crazy, yes…. I want DAVID dead. so evil gives me nightmaresT.T Is it just me why do I feel like Lara is still alive?
I am at a loss of words. This chapter was by far the best I’ve ever read from you, brteyes. You are a master of suspense, drama, angst….damn, it would take me a lifetime to list it all. Let’s just brief it by saying that you’re a damn brillant writer with a vivid imagination. You’re illustrating and portraying the most difficult scenes and write them with ease. I’m truly in awe. You aren’t taking any writing lessons, are you? I loved the conversation between Alice and Dana. Finally, Dana knows all the facts considering what led Al to Roxy in the first place. I’m also happy that it was a sincere talk. None of them tried to hide any facts and we finally discover what Al told Roxy as she found her at her mother’s. That part was very important. At least, now I do understand it way better why Roxy wanted to kidnap Dana. I too believe that it wasn’t that smart of Alice to tell Roxy that she has potential. It only gave her hope and another reason to pursue her goal. I’m also glad that Al’s not going to live with Dana for the time being. Maybe this separation plus the therapy might help them through with the chaos that’s evidently visible in their current lives. Roxy will still remain a big factor ….if not the biggest. I admire Roxy’s courage. She’s pretty brave by trying to attack David. Of course he anticipated it though. If that’s not bad luck for poor Roxy. It seems like she’s stuck in her “prison” for a long time unless David’s nice enough to let her go. I’m sure, he’s planning to free her at some point but I am not quite convinced that Roxy is going to follow through with David’s conditions. I guess, she needs more brainwashing….if that might help. I can’t believe how great the sex scene was this time. You are just amazing. All I can say is W-O-W!!! This scenario is outstanding, even though it looks so simple. You have all my respect for writing it so damn realistic. I know the sex scenes are normally the most difficult to get down on paper but you’re outdoing yourself with each time. Last but not least I would like to thank you for dedicating this chapter to me. I’m feeling very honored. It’s always a great pleasure and reward to be able to read your masterpiece. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!! Especially for sharing such an ultimate magnificent story. I appreciate it in the biggest way. Am already looking forward to your next installmentJ You know I need something before Christmas, lol. Brteyes, I love your work and I cherish every single word you’re writing down. You are a genius, darlin’!!!!
OMG, “I haven’t even gotten to my sickest chapter yet.” brteyes, you rock. It is thrilling to know that there are more to look forward to. Please don’t quit after this story. I am sure you will come up with another equally awesome story. As for my last comment, I was just thinking out loud and kind of messing around. You are doing such a tremendous job and I have no intention in interfering with your story or creativity. It is more fun for me to be a reader and the truth is I can’t write if my life depends on it. Back to this update, David told the truth, A was an addiction to Roxy. “This isn’t a vacation … Not catering to your every wish,” was funny. Letting Roxy watch A & D together reminded me of the movie “A Clockwork Orange,” where a violent sex offender was forced by the British police to watch extremely violent acts for hours and days to recondition him. It worked and he became physically ill every time he thought of violence. You are a genius with this therapy. Maybe this would work in reconditioning Roxy as well. I love the entire talk between A & D. “You’re not stupid, Alice… just naïve.” A’s response was “Gee thanks, I feel so much better now.” Just perfect. Now, seriously, the whole surveillance thing is getting really creepy and I wish D would go with A to housesit. After I read that Roxy was watching it, I felt like I was a peeping Tom myself, which meant your writing was totally effective. The whole thing with David’s revenge, while it’s fascinating, I can’t help but worrying for both A & D. Thanks a lot, brteyes! it is truly a fantastic chapter. And you deserve every compliment given.
Wow, brteyes, you did it again. Another great chapter. And, again, you have me feeling bad for Roxy. I really can’t understand what David is up to with her. I had a feeling that the video equipment might be used that way. What an invasion of privacy. Mind you, I plan to call my cable company ASAP and try to get that channel. ;-D I love that the girls are talking and that Dana told Alice about what Roxy did on Halloween. I’m glad Alice told Roxy that she wanted only Dana. At least Alice knows what she wants. I’m also happy that both girls are doing therapy and that they plan to back up a bit and try to date. This house sitting thing of Alice’s has me bit worried, though… Thanks for the great update!!
OH MY GOD!!!! As i sed before .. i think lol you never cease to amaze me with your story. As much as i dislike Roxy for all the touble she has casued wats happenin with her at the mine with her past and of course David a very tiny part of me feels for her, they do say people are the way they are for reason and well Dirk has defo seemed to help make Roxy the person she is. As for David well dont get me started on this nutter lol having those cameras in Dana’s house, clever way to torture Roxy forcing her to watch Al and Dana but well there bound to be another reason with David. Anyways so glad that Al and Dana finally had tht talk they’ve needed for so long and well you always give us good, no brilliant danish sex lol.Cant wait for ur next post hope it little sooner this time carry on the good work love it always. :):)x x x
wonderful!!!! your writing is extremely good, extremely..i love this story so much plus you dnt leave us waiting that long..long but not long u know, neways im glad alice and dana are back together its sucks that they’ll be apart for a while im a little nervous at that prospect i wonder what will happen..as long as they dnt get with other ppl or get hurt it’ll be fine haha hey where’d that video go the one of dana druged up and getting it on with someone other than alice, will alice every see it now that thingys dead (lol sorry) and roxys trapped im very curious about that. I hope this story will never end especilly in the near future :)