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Masked Feelings CH 59 The Halloween Edition
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Dana kissed her deeply, pressing her thigh between Alice’s legs. Alice wrapped her arms around her neck, pulling her closer to further deepen the kiss. Dana was grinding into her, their bodies growing hot… glistening with a sheen of passionate perspiration. Alice moves her hands down Dana’s back, cupping her ass…. pushing her body harder into her own. She moans into Dana’s mouth….
The phone rings… and rings. Finally the answering machine picks up the call….it’s Alison.
" Dana, where are you? You promised to call me when you got home. When are you coming back? I thought we could do that thing where I sit on your lap and…..
Dana scrambles to get off Alice and practically trips over the coffee table to get to the phone. She grabs the phone and answers it. Alice was still laying on the couch wondering what the fuck had happened. She had heard part of Alison’s message but was curious as to what the rest of it would’ve said.
Dana walks to the bathroom with the phone pressed to her ear, leaving Alice all alone in the room. When Dana came back wearing a robe, Alice was already getting dressed. Dana looks at her, shaking her head in disapproval….but she still continued to get dressed. Dana interrupts her phone conversation.
Dana – Can you hold on for a sec?
Dana puts her hand over the receiver.
Dana – Why are you getting dressed? I’ll be off here in a couple minutes.
Alice – Go ahead and talk to her. I have to go… it’s late anyway.
Dana – Don’t go… at least wait till I’m off the phone.
Alice – I’m tired, its been a long day. I’ll see you tomorrow, Dana.
Dana – But I’m not going to be here tomorrow.
Alice – Oh yeah, I forgot. I guess I’ll see you when you get back then.
Dana – If you can’t give me a few minutes then go ahead and leave.
Alice -Don’t be mad at me, just because you were the one to answer the phone. I’m not going to make you cut your conversation short for me.
Dana – I’m going to see her tomorrow so it’s no big deal, Alice.
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Just wanted to say CONGRADS on your one year mark. I actully have not read your story YET but I noticed the date on your first chapter and decided to come congradulate you before I began :-) Well I have to go get started lol…brb…well maybe not RIGHT back but you know what I mean lol
Happy Anniversary! One year :) What a great chapter with the chiming and the fangs and the edible undies. I’m on overload over here, I think maybe my previous comment confused you I love Roxy because I hate her and I hate her because she isn’t that far from a regular obsessed maniac bent on destroying a relationship for her own benefit and that’s why I love her ;) Alice is getting some help which is great she’s really messed up and I hope that this new psychologist isn’t just a psycho…you have to have a degree for the ‘logist’ Dana is becoming a bit of a player, getting some tips from Shane I think I hope that she eventually drops Allie and I hope that Dana doesn’t breed her own Roxy. The chiming in the phone is very intriguing I would ask but I am sure you won’t tell me so I’ll let it ride and wait for you to reveal to me what’s going down. This chapter was truly magnificent and I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next happy one year babe I love you.
Happy Anniversary! It’s hard to believe you’ve been writing, and we’ve been following this story for so long. Thanks for helping make Dana live on.
Well you already know how much I love your story… Congrats on the anniversary too!!! So I have a question… are Roxy and Allie going to hook up and team up on the Dana and Alice? Allie is making me a little uneasy. I am waiting for her to turn out to be Lara partner in crime. Wonderful chapter as always. Please don’t stop… I’m begging you. :)
Fantastic! Congrats on you one year anniversary. This was a fabulous update. I’ve actually been reading for a while and have yet to comment… sorry. But I really love the story and this update was awesome, though I’m getting a little nervous about the whole Lara situation as well as Allie. Hopefully it will all work out though… right?
Happy anniversary! I am sort of disappointed that Dana forgot to call Alice and that Dana didn’t seem to be honest with Allie about her newly changed relationship with Alice. I hope Allie doesn’t become obsessive about Dana, she could use a sane friend without an agenda. It feels like Dana seems to be at a turn point regarding her tennis career, which bring up the question of what Dana would do with out tennis? It is good that Alice is finally getting professional help. I can wait to see how that goes and to see Dana and Alice finally talk about their relationship. PPS
So you want an OMFG-award? I think I could give you a pumpkin head (which looks a lot like Lara’s head) with 5 candles in it. One in the shape of the number 1 and the other candles will be the letters O, M, F and G. Do you like it? ;) Congrats on your 1 year anniversary! :D This chapter was great! I know it’s (chronologically) not possible, but I’ve somehow got the feeling that Allie is a reincarnation of Lara. They do share some ‘characteristiscs’ (cooking and possesiveness). Who was this person who was calling Dana? It was either someone who is related to Lara or Allie. And the last paragraph…sigh. Dana realized she falling again for Alice. *doing a happy dance* I wish it could stay like that forever…but even in a perfect world that doesn’t seem to be possible. Let alone in this twisted reality you’ve created for them. :P I’m all prepared…so bring it on baby! (Wohoo…I’m so brave! :P)
Fantastic – congratulations on your one year anniversary – now let’s make it two. Keep it coming as your writing is getting better and better.
So it’s your turn to amuse me? Well you certainly did that & more. I can’t even tell you how badly I wanted to get home tonight to read this update … it was more fun than my Halloween plans … although not nearly as fun as Alice & Dana’s Halloween evening in Kit’s office. That was definitely hot & I’m all about the steamy, smutty sex … but damn are you a freakin’ tease. You always have to leave us on the edge & guessing. The damn chimes & the hang ups. Roxy being, well … Roxy. Lara’s demented family. And of course the cliffhanger of them all … Dana professing her love fro Alice. Damn dirty tease!! As for this qualifying as a dirty fic … OH HELL YEAH!!! chapters 48 & 49 … which I have to read as one … is what I consider to be the hottest scene sex I have ever read in a fanfic before and I have been reading fanfic for at least 7 years. I thought you fucking melted my brain after I was finished. Nothing is hotter than passionate, angry sex! As for wanting to know anything about me … all you have to do is ask. Keep it coming!!!
Congratulations to your anniversary!!!! I would like to sing a ‘Happy Birthday’ song for you but I’m sure you would run away as soon as my voice would trail out of my mouth, lol. Please be sure that you have a wonderful gift letting us participate with this magnificent story. Of course, I loved this chapter!!!! First, I was depressed because Of Dana and Allie. I screamed and cried, my world felt apart. Dana, how could you do this to Alice??? As for Dana she has to tell Al what was going on between her and Allie. But, how will Alice react? Will she forgive Dana or go back to Roxy? That would be devastating. Thanks for considering one of my ideas. I really appreciate this:-)))Tina and Bette dressing like Laurel and Hardy was perfect and Jenny being double-dumbed made me laugh even harder. Also liked the idea of Kit wearing a witch dress:-) So Roxy had a date on Halloween? Who could that be? An ex-prisoner she forced to date her? lol I hope you tell us the next time. It seems that Roxy slowly accepts Al’s decision letting her alone but I still think it’s a tactical measure. With Roxy you never know, lol. And Lara’s still alive? Now, I’m really curious who meets her first. After being such a psycho I suppose she mutated to an even worse Alien, lol. Maybe Alice should visit a self-defence course so she can kick Lara’s ass even harder than Schwarzenegger, lol. Loved that Alice had such a great psychologist. Her name is Dawn? Don’t know why but I call her Damn, lol. Sounds better:-)) You know how to make someone curious when it comes to your story. As I wrote before, I cried in the beginning and didn’t like you at all, lol but towards the end you were my best pal, lol. Thanks for this great interaction between Alice and Dana in the closet. That becomes a cliché, lol.Dana is so sweet coming back home for Halloween just to surprise her love. What a romance!But I’m pretty sure you will kill me with the next chapter. Alice will find out that Dana had a thing with Allie, Dana on the other way will find out that Al works together with Roxy and Lara comes out of the bush to make someone scream louder than a baby, lol.I hardly forgot psycho number two David, lol. Okay, then two people will cry likebabies, lol. Hope you don’t keep us waiting long, my dear:-)) You know I can’t get enough of this and I need a quick fix, lol. Lots of greets and my best wishes to your anniversaryagain:-))))
Congrats brteyes![one year on,wow!]. You should be proud of yourself cos YOU desereve it!! Danas phone calls and the chiming in the background was very mysterious but even more so was that it was Dana that was getting them and not Alice…yet? Alice in therapy is fantastic, hoooray!! Please, please let her counsellor be genuine?… i will even get on my hands and knees and beg lol. Roxy is still lurking and being a little too nice to Alice. Oh and what poor unsuspecting soul has gone on a date with Roxy?…is it someone we know? Even though i liked the gang together at the planet, i was overjoyed when Dana surprised Alice at the party, their phonecall was so intimate and secretive! The visions in my mind of Vampiress Alice made me go weak, phew! very sexy!!… who could resist? The Anniversary kiss then the HOT, HOT lovemaking that followed was for me, their first true connection as a couple and not just sex! Now that Dana has told Alice that she loves her im hoping she will get help with her sex addiction and finish with Alison!..well i can dream cant i?lol. Danish also desperately need the talking to start! Cant wait for the next chapter because you certainly left me curious with this one and your imagination just gets better each time. Aww im only playin with ya, i wont torture or leave you hanging by a thread anymore lol. You are funny and i knew it!… you ARE a softy after all!! If you want to you can ask away, i wont tease! Oh and heres a question for you? What initially inspired you to write this story and what really motivates you to keep it going?
happy halloween! yay! got my treat… this danish fix! you are awesome. loved it.
God I loved this. Really, truly – it was awsome.But I can sense that the whole Alison/Dana thing is going to dampen the events…. update soon!
FIRST… shame, shame shame! on me for missing chapters!! BUT im all caught up and holy crapppola what a treat! oh and HAPPY 1 YEAR thats fantastic!! I dont even know where to start so much as happened i gotta say it was AWESOME Alice and Dana seem to be going GOOD cept for all the lil lying in between which only screams trouble! much of which i dont want to happen lol For some reason Alie is starting sound kind of kooky like Roxy/Lara kooky really cant wait to find out what her intentions with Dana are and Kristin needs to get slapped! well after she’s healed i suppose and i smell more trouble if shes going to be staying with Dana then how will Alice and her do their lil secret dating thing. OF COURSE i cant forget about ROXY cuz u sure wont let me lol still… she sucks and does it well! but i gotta say she has balls coming to the party as a tennis player thats just priceless my thoughts on this whole Lara thing is way up in the air somehow i keep coming back to lara brother he is her twin so… hmmm he could of taken her body he could be that crazy then again lara could be just fine and watching over Dana. If she is alive i hope shes out to get back at Roxy FIRST! lol ur brilliant!! and ur writting has only gotten better so i bow down to your greatness! really cant wait for the next chap!!! YOU ROCK BRT!!! x0x0x
First off, congratulations on your one year mark of this story. I think you know how much I love it, but I’ll keep on saying it. This one was especially amazing because it marked their first kiss. I loved how Dana surprised Alice in the closet…that was too funny. And Dana finally realising she still loves her or is falling for her all over again is just fucking great! I’m looking forward to the next chapter(s) to come. I will be waiting by my computer to read the next one. Thanks!