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Masked Feelings CH 55 The Seduction of Dana
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Alice felt like this was all a dream. The only reason why she went after Dana in the first place was because of Kristen. The circumstances leading up to now had not been good. From the moment she arrived at the bed and breakfast and saw that Dana wasn’t alone proved very detrimental to her heart. Alice had no intention of wanting to be introduce to Alison, which was why she pretended that she wasn’t there and picked the fight to the point where Dana had no choice but to leave. Her actions were irrational, but she couldn’t help it…. when she saw Dana with anyone beside herself it made her crazy. She knew that Dana would be too fired up to continue anything she had planned with Alison. When she reflected on it, she could see the similarity in how Roxy was with her and that made her feel worse then ever. If she ever was going to stand a chance with Dana, she’d have to work through her jealousy issues. Thats why it was more important then ever to follow through with the therapy. Even though she was with Dana now didn’t mean it would remain that way, most likely this meant more to her then it did to Dana.
Dana wanted Alice to sit in her lap. After Alison had done that with her, she found it to be very arousing. Alice had something else in mind, because she pushed Dana’s shoulders down on the mattress when she sat up.
Dana – Awww, come on, Alice. I wanted to try something with you.
Alice – You already had your chance, Dana. Now it’s my turn.
Dana – Well you better do something soon. I’m starting get cold.
Alice – Sounds like your pouting…and it looks like it too. What do I have to do to put a smile back on your face? Better yet, let me figure it out….
Alice laid on top of her. Nuzzling into her neck, she kissed a trail from her ear down to her shoulder… letting her teeth bite into her shoulder. Dana flinched.
Alice – Did that hurt?
Dana – Uh… no.
Alice – What’s up then?
Dana – Nothing…. just a… muscle spasm. God Dana you’re such a liar…..
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i think roxy should show up dead some where please get rid of her
I freakin hate Roxy, must she always spoil the danish bliss?! I’m totally sucked into this story and they way you write it is amazing, I’m in awe. I love the drama don’t get me wrong but I wish Dana and alice would sit down and communicate for once! Ok I’m calm and got that out lol, great chap xx
wow…hooo, that was hot!!…but roxy had to end the bliss. man, if she keeps this up, she’s going to be almost as evil as lara. it’s so funny to read every1 wishing roxy was dead. reminds me of the times when the readers wished lara would die. and then lara did die…or is she still alive? can’t wait to read the next chapter. hopefully dana won’t close herself off even more after talking to kristen. thanks for writing.
Well, at least they had their moment at the hotel, and in the mud – or course. lol Dana is obviously pissed because she thinks Alice and Roxy are still communicating, but no matter how bad things are going to get, Alice and Dana have a tremendous pull towards each other. Eventually they will get back together. Since we all know that “eventually” can mean a mighty long time, thank you for taking pity on our poor danish hearts. We needed this bright spot! That Halloween party kiss seems sooooooo long ago. :-)
It’s absurd how quickly you can turn a story from DAMN!!!! to DAMN YOU WOMAN!!! I should have known better than to think you’d make it that easy. Actually I didn’t, but I wanted to believe it … even if for just a moment. That was damn hot & I’m looking forward to what you have planned next … perhaps there will be more pleasant surprises like the last 2 chapters!
I love it and I too am not liking roxy please post soon
Wow!!! Impressive writing again – please don’t let Roxy spoil it all for our Danish lovers. If you need a hit man (I mean woman) let me know, I’m you’re man (I mean woman)!!!
Great chapter. While Dana and Alice still have a really strong connection, I don’t know if it will be enough to overcome the obstacles in their way. Dana doesn’t trust Alice and what happen with between Kristen and Derek illustrates that once trust is damaged in relationship it is hard to rebuild and can be easily shattered again, especially if Roxy (or someone else) is pulling strings behind the scenes. After hearing the Roxy’s message it is going to be a long ride home for Dana,and Alice. Alice’s past behavior (i.e. not telling Dana about Lara and thinking Dana was cheating on her with Kristen) also suggest that she has trouble trusting Dana. Is this due to the rape by Lara or does it go back further with Alice not being used to having someone to look out for her?It is very interesting that Alice noticed that she was trying to manipulate Dana, like Roxy had manipulated her. Hopefully this insight will help Alice to keep Roxy from manipulating her in the future not help her to manipulate Dana further. As Bette pointed out in chapter 53 Alice is becoming skilled at manipulation, which I think she started to develop when she was dealing with Lara and Gina. I am still puzzled about Alice’s feelings for Roxy. Alice never seems answers that questions when someone asks her.:}Why did Alice choose to make out with then and sleep with Roxy, knowing she was going to hurt Dana and ruin their relationship? Is there, as Roxy thinks, a connection between Alice and Roxy?
Well you get a second OMFG from me! I really didn’t expect you to continue right where you left off last chapter (but that is a mistake I always seem to make…you always pick up where you left us hanging…the good or the bad). I think I’m just going to ignore the last two pages of this chapter, so I still consider myself on cloud nine. ;) Happy Danish! And you were wrong…there were some explosions in this chapter. lol. Ok, Kristen and Roxy might be teaming up. But I think Roxy will overdo it and Kirsten will turn away from her. Roxy will be all alone again on this in the end. No one to help her. *evil laugh* I wonder if Alison will show up in this story later on. And there are still a lot of unanswered question, where’s Lara? What’s the mystery man doing? Where will Dana stay now she’s back in town? Will Alice be staying over at Bette and Tina’s? I could go on and on with loads of question. I’m looking forward to the next chapter, I’m very curious where you are going to take this story!
awww man!!! back to life… back to reality… fricken roxy! ha ha ha… loved this update.
God you are just killing me. Haha all happy times until bloody roxy shows up again. Seriously just make her fall off a cliff or something… really quickly, and get our danish back together!
Well congratulations brteyes.. youve brought a Danish lover out of hiding with this fantastic chapter!![Ive followed this incredible story from the beginning]. WOW,”The seduction of Dana”…well it definately was and it was amazingly hot!!I cant tell you how happy i am that the Danish connection is still there after everything that has gone on and its given me the faith that i needed to show me that they still have a chance to make it together!! The message from Roxy knocked me sideways a little at first but then i realised that it was needed to get us all back to reality! The fact that Dana doesnt trust Alice right now, and Alice being weak when it comes to Roxy is still a major factor and this has to be dealt with and sorted out fully before they can be together in a true relationship! Dana deleting Alices message i feel was wrong, but i can understand why she did it.Without trust there is no communication and thats why Dana couldnt let Alice find the message herself cos she cant trust Alice to do the right thing with Roxy…and thats for Alice to realise that Roxy is a manipulative, controling,nasty b*tch who plays on vulnerable peoples emotions!!!Phew just had to get that off my chest LOL!! Well i know that we are still in for a bumpy ride and i will be reading this all the way till the end…whatever happens.Your writing is awesome!!!!
Renski is right about the trust issue, but if Dana had not erased the message, Alice would have known that she listened to it. I think she erased it more because she was mad. What about the fact that she was going to call Alison? What was she going to say to the woman she was in bed with the day before?
HOT! HOT! HOT! I also want the same massage lol. Now I’m really jealous, I have to say. You amaze me with every chapter you write. It’s so incredible good and it’s always a great pleasure to find out what happens next. THANKS! You’re right, we indeed need a support group for all the Danish fans out there lol. That’s why I enjoy reading those fanfics, especially yours, as you know. I started reading it early September ’06 and I read all chapters you wrote from october on at once. You bring so much fantasy and other characters in this and you make soooooo much drama of that. And that’s what I like the most. Without drama no real story, right? Deep inside I hoped you would make more of Roxy and how I see you said you will. The complicated and complex the better. Long live Danish in our hearts!Thank you for answering some of my questions:-) I knew you wouldn’t let me down on this. As I can foresee it will still be a very long way ’till Danish ultimately can trust each other again. Now it’s Alice’s turn to show our ‘sex-goddess-lady’ Dana that Roxy does not count for her anymore. And it would be great if Bette holds back with her opinion lol. It only encourages Roxy to make Alice hers and Dana to let her go. And everybody of us knows: that’s absolutely not working for us, lol. Oh, I forgot to ask something. Perhaps you give me an answer to that (I really hope): Will there be again a physical fight between Roxy and Dana? The first one was hilarious. I couldn’t make it better as to help her with all the other Danish fans lol. But then there would be no Roxy LOL. Now I have to wait another loooooooooooooooooong week to read the next chapter but it’s more than worth it!! We have a date next monday. Don’t forget and please don’t let me down lol.See/Read you then:-) Lots of greets…….*brteyes-fan*
Where to start to comment on this absolutely great chapter, lots has been said! Alice and Dana definatly had a connection in the last two chapters but somehow it felt disconnected! They had sex but they didn’t make love. I got it wrong last time. But you write it so damn well that you had me fooled…good for you. You know I’ll take Danish anyway I can get it but that phone call form Roxy really sucked big time. Hope Dana says something about it to Alice on the ride home. They have such a long way to go, and knowing your writing they won’t get there for a while but I put my faith in you again to make it right. I just wanted to say thanks for writing this story for so long and for keeping it so very interesting, I don’t know how you do it but I love you for it. I will re-read and look forward to next week.
once again you’ve written an incredibly hot chapter. kudos my friend! but what is up with the ending there? isn’t it bad enough with all the doubt they both have? why did ya have to go and throw that roxy message in there too? poor little dana. and poor alice too. roxy really must go.
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW baby that was solar eclipse amazingly hot. It’s hard to believe that I inspire that much heat because damn that was great. I even loved the loop you threw me for at the end. Alice just can’t seem to catch a break can she? Well I guess that’s how life goes, so Roxy has a bit of a conscience? Well I’m surprised but not really, the poor woman is just obsessed and how can you not be. I love that Alice has that bit of jealousy I know exactly how it feels. You can really say anything because it’s not your place but your eyes are soooo green you can’t see straight ;) It was an amazing chapter love and you know I can’t wait for the next, maybe I’ll actually get a snippet this time. Oh the promises! And my longing for inside information these things will be the death of me. I love you babe and I can’t wait for more.