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Masked Feelings CH 48 Agony at its Best
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Dana had made it to her car door when Kristen came up behind her to touch her shoulder. She turns around to face Kristen.
Dana – Kristen? What are you doing here?
Kristen – Waiting for you. Everyone has been worried about you, Dana.
Dana – Let me guess they called the FBI in on this one. You found me now… you can go home.
Kristen – Dana, I know you’re hurting. You can talk to me.
Dana – You have no fucking idea…
Kristen – Then talk to me about it, Dana. I’ll just listen.
Dana looking like she’s considering her offer.
Kristen – Come on… I’ll buy you a coffee and you can unload on me.
Kristen puts her arm around her and they walk down the street to a small diner.
Roxy sat in her SUV down the street. She had been watching for Dana, long before Kristen showed up. Kristen’s appearance only made Roxy more angry. She wanted to get to Dana before Kristen did. Roxy wanted to pay her back for that beating. The kick in the ribs was a dirty blow and it still hurt to breathe. It was all so unexpected but now that she knew what Dana was capable of when she was angry, she’d be ready for her. Right now, her interest was in Kristen. She interfered in a private matter between Alice and herself…. and to her that was unforgivable. Roxy was exhausted. She had stayed up all night looking for her when all she really wanted to do was go see Alice again… but she had company. Alice had way too many friends…. and they were like a wall, she’d have to blast her way through them to get to her.
Alice had a vacant look in her eyes. She had the phone in a death grip and her knuckles turned white from squeezing it too hard. Tina pried it from her fingers and walked her over to the couch.
Tina – You want to tell me what that call was all about?
Alice – That was Kristen, she found Dana.
Tina – Thats great! Is she on her way home?
Alice – I guess we’ll see. Kristen promised to talk to her… try to convince her to come home.
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Woah scary Dana, I really hope she starts to forgive Alice soon, they went through so much to be together. I still feel really sorry for Alice even though she fucked up. Great chap, loved it as usual, please post soon. -x-
Wow, I really want to know how you’re gonna resolve this, I’m intrigued. Thanks.
Whoa. Intense much?! I was almost scared to continue reading! Dana is in a scary place right now, and I’m not sure I would put anything past her! Great chapter as usual! I’m sorry if I havent commented before, but I really love this story! Please post soon! I can’t wait to see what happens!
OF COURSE I DIDNT LIKE THE END OF THIS! but it was TOO GOOD! and way too intense! you almost made me cry! but im actually glad Dana didn’t do the sappy thing and cry and forgive Alice! then i would of really been pissed! and of course!! : clears throat :brteyes brteyes SHE’s the one if she cant fix this then i think im done.. lol um i think my cheering days are OVER but i will be cheering for you in silence lol but seriously amazing chap! cant wait for next sunday! that is if your up to it! :) oh and.. im sorry im still on the ship that roxy is far from human! just evil evil evil! so just make her death quick so she doesn’t suffer so much :/ lol
Holy shit! This was beyond intense, I mean you told me it was going to be hot, and you told me it was going to crazy, but this is beyond anything I thought I could read…or even imagine lol. I love every chapter and I can’t believe I had to wait this long to read it, usually when you post I’m right on it but I had so much to do today and I kept thinking “I can’t wait to read the chapter, I can’t wait to read the chapter.” Excellent as usual, I hope your not feeling detached anymore. There’s no way you could write that and be detached, if so your even more amazing than I originally thought and I thought you were pretty fucking amazing to begin with. You just built some amazing tension and caused me to wonder what’s going to happen next….I’m so intrigued, this aggressive Dana is very sexy and very scary at the same time I hope she can pull out of this but it sounds like she needs some professional help as well. I just want you to know I’m hooked for life love. Till next Sunday (hopefully I know what your schedule for next week is like).
I almost feel sorry for Alice. Ok, I do feel sorry for her, but right now I’m on Dana’s side.
wow, oh wow….wow….wow. whooo, angry sex….yeah. O.O i don’t know what else say, but it’s a great update. dana was scary as hell. so glad that u were able to get out the rut u were in. also very afraid of what the next couple of chapters will be like.
Um… Whoa!!!! That was dramatic. A tad intense. A bit naughty. I sure hope you follow this up soon because once again you have me perched on the edge of my chair wanting more.
wow, yes seriously intense. That was a hard chapter for me to read but you write so well, you have me hooked! I’m interested to see what happens next, I’m sure there’s a lot of hurting on the way, but I’m prepared! fantastic update, looking forward to next sunday!
OMG, so may thing are going through my head right now! But the main thing, where to go from here?!?! Ok, they did have their talk…and a lot more… Dana is not the only one who has a problem (being an aggressor). It really bothers me that Alice lets powerful women take control over her in a sec… She keeps looking for confirmation. But she must learn that getting attention is not always a good thing (especially negative one). (Ok, done with my theoretical rambling. :)) Dana was really obnoxious with Kristen (loved it). Dana is walking around like an unguided missile. Who will catch her? Her further actions really depend on who she runs in next, doesn’t it? My only hope at the moment for these two is that the line between hate and love can be thin indeed. As much as Dana hates Alice right now, as much Dana will… Well, you can fill in the blanks for yourself. I’m afraid that if I say it out loud, I’m going to jinx their relationship. :) I can understand you can’t reveal all your secrets, but you could reveal one…pretty please (*using Bambi eyes *)?! :D
great chapter but we really need happy, fun danish now. Really!
This may have been the most intense chapter yet! Loved it though, Dana is so angry at this point that she scaring me a bit. But also I understand completely. She is hurt in such a harch way. I feel sad for Alice to though, I know in my heart of hearts that she loves Dana so much. Anyway they’re talking and that’s a good sign. Brteyes you have the edge back (although in my opinion you never lost is) this was a great chapter hope to see a lot more of mad Dana, helpless Alice and sweet Kirsten. I can do without Roxy for a bit. Great chapter as always and look forward to the next one. x
very scary dana can’t wait to see what you have it store for the rest of this story I love it great update and please post soon
The sex scene in this chapter reminds me of the first sex scene between Dana and Alice (way back in chapter 4) although the underlying feelings behind the encounters, especially for Dana, are completely different. The conversation between Dana and Alice was really rang true, especially the mixture of pain and anger from Dana and the desperation from Alice. Although her friends want to ‘protect’ her from Roxy, if Alice is serious about trying to repair her relationship with Dana (and the trust issues between them) she cannot hid behind her friends, she needs to face Roxy and her attraction to her and turn her down. Since her call didn’t get picked up, I wonder if Roxy will stop by to see what is going on?