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Masked Feelings CH 42 The Tables Turn
Roxy – What the hell did I do…. I just woke up for Chris’sake.
Roxy stood there rubbing the sleep out of her eyes. She could feel the two pairs of eyes staring at her without even having to look. Once her eyes were focused, she fired back a comment.
Dana – You know….
Roxy raising her voice.
Roxy – If I did…. why would I be asking?
Dana – The clock…
Roxy – What about it?
Dana – It’s right there on the mantle again.
Roxy – Excuse me if I’m a little slow, but wasn’t it there before.
Dana – You dug it out of the garbage!
Roxy – What the hell are you babbling about? You threw the thing away?
Dana – You know I did. If this is one of your little games to drive me crazy… it’s going to stop now.
Roxy now smiling at Dana’s frustration.
Roxy – Gee, Dana… I’d love to take the credit but you better look elsewhere. I wasn’t the only person at the party last night. Maybe someone saw it in the garbage and decided that you needed to keep it.
Alice – Why do you have to make a bad situation worse, Roxy? Dana threw that clock out for me. I’m sure it wasn’t easy to let go… and you have to drag that thing back in here.
Roxy – I’m telling you I didn’t do it. What would I stand to get from that? You think I want to see you angry at me? I didn’t even know the clock was missing in the first place. If you look me in the eye… you’ll know I’m telling the truth.
Dana – That won’t prove anything. You’re just a very skilled liar.
Roxy – Fuck you, Dana. I don’t care what you think anyway. If you want me to take the damn thing out, I’ll do it. Fuck, I’ll even go as far as destroying the thing… use it for target practice.
Dana – This is pointless as usual, Alice. She’ll never admit it.
Alice looks at Roxy. She didn’t think she was that good of a liar… her look expressed shock when accused. What was going on?
Dana – Don’t touch the clock, Roxy. I’ll take care of it on my own. Come on, Alice…. lets get dressed and we’ll go out for coffee.
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(46 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
wooo this is getting interesting. i think Dana needs to get the all clear so her and Alice can make the plot a little thicker than it alreadu is. Great work em comming.x
I am afraid!! But I loved every bit of it. Great to see Roxy being in a tough spot. But mistery man is intreging!! So glad you’re back on track with this story (not that I thought you were off :-)) But this sounds like a changing chapter and I love what you’re doing. It was also nice to see Dana relax and smile, hope we get some more happy danish moments in the many chapters ahead!!?? Your loyal fan!
I first read in your summary, ‘Dana gets into Roxy’ and I tought WTF, could it get more complicated?!? But then I read it again and saw I was wrong,at least on Dana getting into Roxy…this story gets more and more complicated (I like it!). :)I’m very curious which direction this story will take (*I think ‘graphic’ and ‘horror’ are the words that would describe the next chapters best :)*). The next chapters will unravel your new obscure ideas… I’m still cluesless on the clock. My guess right now would be the clock either has got feet on its own or the mystery man has something to do with it. :) Alice is a real coward, walking away everytime the tensions gets too strong. The conversation with Dana will be hard for her. Btw, I am indeed a very trusting soul…but while reading your story I will keep my eyes widely open. Never take first impressions for what they are, in the end your story will toughen me. :P
Wow, you always seem to amaze me mate, I do love it, luv it’s getting better and better. Who is this dude and how did he get the tape? I can see him getting the hosp. tape, but the other one he doesn’t sound conected to Tony. Yes, I will cont’ with my kind words ’cause you deserve them…you are an awesome writer **putting on my knee pads and getting down on them** love it. CD is awesome too, but I think she knows that…cheer to the lot of ya…
oh my god! the twists are endless! This was a fabulous chapter, and although you’ve left me utterly confused, i’m so psyched to see what will happen next. i saw the short chapter and thought, oh no its sooo short, but after reading it i am definately satisfied. this is great, i dont know where you come up with these ideas, but i wish i had even half of your creativity for my stories. i am so anxious to see what’s going to happen with roxy, and who the mystery guy is…i thought at first it might be lara’s brother…but then the dude said to leave dana and alice alone..WHO COULD IT BE?! You’ll keep my guessing, that’s for sure. I can’t wait for the next update, great job, baby. Until next time…
Ok I don’t know what the crap is up but I left a comment and it didn’t show. Oh well, I guess you won’t get to marvel in the awesomness that it was. Anyway great chapter, no one gets me screaming “What the fuck!” at my computer quite like you. I love that Dana’s is getting the upper hand, she might not have it for long but it’s going to be sweet while it lasts. This mystery man or woman (I think it’s a woman) she interests me, I’m thinking Lara’s sister I mean, who else would be encouraging Danish? Not Tony he wants Alice and not Lara she supposedly dead and a nutcase. It could be Kristin and that would explain how she got the upper hand on Roxy…Ah conjecture she is a harsh mistress as are you brteyes. Looking forward to the next chapter and the sneak preview…ha! all you suckers have to wait till Sunday and I get the first read!….(I really don’t think you guys are suckers seriously I love you guys I think you’re great). Great job I am hooked on you for life!
this is great and your right I can’t wait to see what you do next to this story please post soon I love it great post
and the plot thickens …I can’t believe we’re over 40 chapters in
Wow so I completely wasn’t expecting the Roxy kidnapping. I bet the mystery man’s Tony. Glad to hear that the talk will be had soon. I just want to get that over with so I can have my sappy Danish moments. I have absolutely no idea where the hell this story is going- and I love it! Great job!!! Can’t wait for the next installment!