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11:11
Previously:
It was now plainly obvious that Brian was ***** his secretary.
Tina laughed bitterly. How cliche, she thought.
She hit the play button on the machine again, and her jaw almost hit the floor as the message began to play.
“Tina, it’s Bette Porter…”
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Meanwhile, in a law firm just off Wall Street…
Brian grunted, groaned, then shot his seed into the woman lying on his
desk beneath him. He climbed off Kendra, zipped up his fly, sat down in
his giant swivel chair, and lit up a cigarette.
“You want one?”
“Nah, I’m okay. I have to get going anyway.”
“Whyyy?” Brian looked at her with puppy-dog eyes and his bottom lip jutting out. Kendra laughed.
“It’s my nephew’s birthday on Sunday, the 15th. Seeing as it’s Friday
night now, and I’m busy tomorrow, I kinda really need to get him a
present or my sister will kill me.”
“Hang on… so… Sunday is the 15th of… May?”
Kendra looked at him strangely.
“Uh… yeah… why?”
“That means… today… the 13th… oh *****!!!”
Brian leapt up, grabbed his briefcase, jacket, phone and keys, and ran out of the office door.
“Kendra! Be a sweetie and lock up, eh?” he shouted over his shoulder.
“Brian, what the ***** is going on?!” she yelled back at him as she followed him down to the carpark.
“Wife’s ex-wife… gonna call… Tina… gonna get message… before I can delete it… me… SO screwed…”
He threw open the door of his Z4 Beemer, started the engine, put it into gear, and roared out of the carpark, tyres screeching.
Kendra watched him leave.
“What the *****…” she muttered to herself.
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Back at the penthouse…
Tina stared wide-eyed at the machine as the message played.
“Tina, it’s Bette Porter. I know that
I’ve left you a phone message on this day for the past eight years
since we split up, and you haven”t replied to any of them.”
What the *****? she thought. I never got any messages! Unless…
It hit her.
Brian, you *****.
She fumed.
But… why?!
“I’m wondering if you’re getting them
at all, or if you really hate me that much. Anyway, this is the last
message that I’ll ever leave you, and then you won’t need to think
about me ever again.
Tina, I… I’m dying.”
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LOL!..Brian is lukie he ran 4his fukin life..ahahaha omg!..this is SO gooD..T married Brian’z ass 4the $ he married her 4senate..LUV IT!..Alice got her sign!! Lets get the gang bak 2gether&make everybodi happie alright!? THNXlot4writing POst soon will u?!
EXCELLENT Go TK sry I haven’t commented but it is hard at work.. But I am a reader and enjoy your writing..Post soon. Have a Merry Christmas if you don’t get to post before…
Oh the drama…I love it!
Fantastic story. Go TK and run to Bette!!! Please post again soon.
I echo what others have said. This is way sad, but dammit you had to go and make me laugh with the comment that The Planet’s coffee tasted like poopy-shit. lol Brian…OMFG I don’t know if I’m capable of murder, but I think I would damn well get close to it with him if he pulled that shit with me.
give us drama…even if it breaks our hearts. I just ask that you make Bette all better, and I trust that you will, and please,please post soon
I enjoy fan fiction as an alternative to the poopy sh** Ilene feeds us. This is too much drama, death and destruction and the antithesis of the Christmas stories I’ve been reading.Hope you resurrect Bette, Tina and the framily although I’m curious about where you’re taking this.
speechless…… Wow this is good!!!!
good story so far except for bette dying –it’s christmas no sadness needed–post soon
ok my heart started beating really fast. intense, very intense.
Alot.I said a lot. not all of some are so great. of the male are assholes. Since Tina left the whole gang went to pot. Post soon. thanks
Why is life always that way. Is there any way that Tina can save Bette?
i was just thinking about this fic, you’re not really going to stop there are you? please continue, pretty please?
Damn. That’s alot of drama. Post soon.
Talk about drama! Hopefully Bette has been misdiagnosed, Kit is in rehab and Shane is alive and also in rehab. Please post soon.
Oh fuck this so sad hurt alot. If I’m Tina I will kick his ass so hard that he never walk again. Plesae let Tina be there on time and be with Bette and please dont let Bette die, just sad and you made me cry. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Tina was to nice to Brian if you ask me.Great chapter.
Sad! Everyones life went down the toilet since T left. Brian and T’s dad are creeps.
is your name Ilene? because this sounds like season 3 LOL…i hope bette’s diagnosis is wrong…and everybody will be happy again
B&TF: *cough* uh, of course not! why on earth would you think that? LOL. its olivia, btw :D (i know, just like the cruise company. shutup.)
Wow…. Way sad! I think there should be a law in fan fic that neither Tina nor Bette can have anything terminal. Besides, we have IC to provide us misery and grief! LOL
This is absolutely heartbreaking! My Tibette heart can’t take it! I can’t believe how f***** up everyone has become since Tina left. Please don’t leave us crying on our pillows for too long. Maybe even a little happiness for them in the next chapter. *wink,wink* However, I’m willing to follow whereever you take us with this story. Post soon!
Good, finally. Please post soon
“… i just make them dance like puppets” You’re not kidding! ;-)
So I guess we’ll all have to wait and see where this leaves them huh?
What a miserable life for everyone… Don’t let Bette die… But how could Tina face Bette. I mean, she never fought for their love in the last 7 or 8 years…
PLEASE LET THE GANG COME BACK TO BEING THE GANG. GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON.
Wow!! Now there’s a lot of drama!!!! Thanks…now, let’s hope that this is your version of If it’s a Wonderful Life…otherwise, it’s sounds like our girls are all screwed.
Brian is a f*cking asshole. do post soon…!!!
Damn…you weren’t kidding when you said “the shit’s gonna hit the fan.” Such DRAMA…didn’t think there would be anyone left to pick Tina up from the airport. LOL. Brian got off too easy…hopefully, Tina’ll handle that later. Thanks for the post.
Ok….you’ve left it toooo longgggggggg……….where the hell is chap 4!!! LOL….you need to get writing again babe…you can’t just leave us hanging there…
You stopped now? Really? I need the right years recap!
Great starting ooint