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Eyes Open – Chapter Nine – An Alice and Dana Fic
Dana checked her watch for what seemed like the nineteenth time. Seated at a
table in a secluded corner of the Planet, the tennis player kept her eye on the door for any glimpse of her best friend.
It was now 3:04, and Alice was late.
And Alice was never late, Dana fretted internally.
Impatiently, she grabbed her cell phone from the table and contemplated calling
her best friend. Looking at the entrance once more, she snapped the contraption
shut upon seeing Alice rush through the Planet’s doors.
Dana watched as Alice immediately looked around in search of the tennis
player. Alice’s eyes finally landed on Dana’s location, and the
two girls locked eyes.
Tucking the fingers of one hand in her jeans back pocket and twirling
her car keys with the other, Alice approached Dana with a sly
smile. Dana’s heart pounded in her chest as the blonde
strolled to the table.
Here we go, Dana thought.
“Hey,” Alice said once she arrived. She fidgeted for a moment,
shifted her weight from one foot to the other, and jokingly asked, “May
I join you?”
Dana smiled playfully and silently waved her hand towards the chair across from
her, welcoming Alice to sit.
“You’re late.” The brunette chided.
“I know.” Alice responded as she sat.
Dana paused. “You’re never late.”
“I know.” Alice remarked, glancing knowingly at Dana, but saying
nothing else. Truth be told, Alice had been sitting outside in
her car for the last ten minutes, mustering her courage for the
impending conversation. She’d never clue Dana in on that bit of
information though. Never.
Not sure on how to interpret Alice’s glibness, Dana wanted to probe
further but was interrupted as Alice abruptly called out, “Seymour!”
Turning around to see the Planet employee heading to their table, Dana
dropped her shoulders in frustration. Was Alice really intent on
having a conversation with a Planet staff member now?
Alice glanced quickly at Dana, noting her irritation. Quickly
diverting her gaze away from the tennis player, the blonde offered a
geniune smile in Seymour’s direction. Alice wasn’t quite ready to
initiate a confrontation with Dana, and a quick conversation with
Seymour was a welcome temporary distraction.
“Hey,” Alice greeted Seymour as he approached their table. She
furrowed her brow in confusion as she remarked, “We usually only see
you in the mornings. Working late?”
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“i can’t go back”… aww… glad you’re back w/ a very cute update. :)
I’ve missed this story so much! And what an update, yowza! I gotta say ‘Take charge Dana’ is hawt…post soon!
wow, i’ve been missing all the great ones lately! Please update soon, your take on this is brilliant!
Glad you’re back! God, Dana is exasperating at times . . . But I like it.
I can’t wait to see what is going to happens please post soon I love it
wow. all i have to say is; wow! i foudn your series of stories earlier tonight and have proceeded to read every last one – and now im left without an update! its great how you capture everything that the characters are about; i almost feel as if im watching an episode. keep it coming, and you can be certain i’ll keep reading!
Go Dana! loved that – glad you’re back.
I’m always amazed and delighted when someone is able to capture perfectly the sexual tension between two characters–and you do it so well in this chapter, I felt myself almost drowning in it. Beautiful. Also, I think you do the approach/avoidence better then IC ever did–please post soon!
What an adorable update. I agree with sinnet, the sexual tension you capture between those two is perfect! Post soon!!
oh man! i totally forgot to comment.. oops! :) but i love this one, since the very beginning! please, post next chapter soon :D *5*